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If you get a draw, you get a glimpse into the world you'll reincarnate into. For 1079 it is pretty sweet

Hahahah, that would've been useful yeah ( tho tbf I probs wouldnt have used it anyways, "Its a short game" I'd reason to myself)

I was playing LunarLux (super good btw) and theres a bunch of references to code bunny (posters and whatnots) so I thought it was a sign to finally buy it. What delight to come here and see its finally on steam! Yeehaw :D And then to see the dev's profile and brazil mentioned

Me gusta mucho la voz del michi

Absolute cinema, as in, literally just cinema. Why would you possibly make a VN in rpgmaker?????? What?² (I gotta respect that!)

The art is nice, very nice, story feels uh... It's def a story alright. I accidentally pressed F12 and screwed myself over halfway through, dang it.

I think I saw 2-3 typos. "adolescants". But whatever

Also, je ne pas parlar français, pourquoi vouz gotta rub salt on my wound, man? Ah, yeah, the red roses substitute leader speaking like a true bro from da hood was a nice aspect, even if it only happened once. I like the characters and their personalities, but the story just feels like a jumbled mess. There's no context and stuff just blows up and happens.

My fav is the mounsieur cuz I am a masochist. Damn it I gotta learn french

Treat, you say. I see you, I see what you mean

Still stand by this btw

Oh man, the art is so pretty!

I enjoyed the writing, the boom booms were lovely. I like the new priestess and the giant guy heh. I hope they become a cool friend trio.

"but none of this symptoms did go away" Shouldn't it be "these"?

"Blunted from grief and helpnesses..." Shouldn't it be helplessness?

"Or maybe it won't, at it will drag him into the underworld." Shouldn't it be "and" or "as" instead of "at"

Spacebar button be life. Also, love the title

still waiting for the remake tbh

Damn you, Else. Why you gotta make me feel, man? Ahh, ahh, konayachi + else = bliss. It's funny cuz Alli was being all sad in the start and I was like "Man, Konayachi plus Else is pure bliss." GOD I LOVE YOUR WRITING AAAAAA (The fluffing "ah yes, I can feel the doppler effect on the vehicles" bahahhahahah) The characters and their interactions... The slap comedy... The friends totally immersed in themselves forgetting about the world outside... I recently had a moment like that, but instead of running in the rain it was running in a street, man, so damn good.

Ah, add a gallery!!! I really wanted the title screen without the buttons... It makes for a great wallpaper!

My favs are Kael and Alli. I thought we'd get a cute scene with each participant, but there wasnt one for revka, was there? Xander reminds me a lot of someone I know heh. "Yap" hahah

The foreshadowing to the hills scares me... I appreciated the music, btw

Typos:

"As the three began to pack up and leave" not really a typo, but like, which 3?? There are 4 people, why just 3???? WHO DIDNT PACK UP???

"there's a man who was listening intently." Shouldn't it be "there was"?

"I'm stuck in this cycle of constantly" Shouldn't it be "I was"? This also happens in that one letter "I feel like I'm stuck in a limbo,"... coincidence, I think not.

"It's too much pressure to draw things the way it is." Shouldn't it be "the way they are"?

"There's no way she'll" Shouldn't it be "she would"?

"and somehow forgot there are other people"  Shouldn't it be "forget"?

"busyness"  Shouldn't it be "Business"?

"What would Nate say if he's here?"  Shouldn't it be "if he was here?"?

"If we do, then we'll be considered gods."  Shouldn't it be "If we did, then we'd be considered gods."?

"He looked at me with those eyes-" Shouldn't it be "- his eyes" or removing "- eyes were"?

"I hope that we could be a home to you, Allison."  Shouldn't it be "can be a home"?

"(When was the last time I feel so safe"  Shouldn't it be "felt"?

"I thought there's finally another girl"  Shouldn't it be "There'd finally be"?

"I haven't receive any"  Shouldn't it be "received"?

"if many people are after his"  Shouldn't it be "were"?

"doesn't like talking about his personal life."  Shouldn't it be "didn't like to talk about"?

"The action I wished I've done,"  Shouldn't it be "I wished I'd done"?

"feeley-feeley"  Shouldn't it be "feely-feely"?

"And since my dreams have been"  Shouldn't it be "had been"?

"Is that what Xander's like back then?"  Shouldn't it be "Xander was like"?

"I guess doing something you love"  Shouldn't it be "does make a difference" or "something I love"?

"make sure you walk home with someone of blend in crowded places" lol what

"Words that I longed to hear, but I just didn't expect them to say it so suddenly."  Shouldn't the "it" be removed?

MY PROBLEMS ARE NOT GONNA GET THE BETTER OF MEEEEE!!! HECK YEAH!

Terima kasih banyak! (Tryna learn indo lol)

So exciting! See you in Sirensia!

Yeah yeah yeah, the "หมายเหตุ" paragraph. Looks like snakes! Such cool letters!

Wow! So good! I loved the atmosphere. The rain, the leaves, it's very pretty!

Also, cant believe the language in the description was just Thai. I legit thought it was a specific font/language for the game cuz the letters just looked so much like snakes

I barely read the description, so I saw something about Sirensia and got excited to play it upon reaching the ending, only to discover it's not ready yet ;-;

I love when the tongue goes up instead of down :D

I wish there was a fly up there ^^

should've proofreadshould've proofreadshould've proofreadshould've proofread

I have like 3 of your games on my backlog, this feels weird. Somehow I wasn't following you.

Por favor releve qualquer typo que eu fiz. SHOULD'VE PROOFREAD

I thought it was a dog, so at least there's no cannibalism in my perspective

So cool! Who would have imagined teaching students could be so hard!? Heheh, I like the idea of training your heroes so they can fight for you

Bugs:

Sometimes after the weekend I'd get a black screen (which had sounds like choosing) before going to the "pick a student to speak to" screen

After supreme victory in forest I got this: invalid map event: 16

Happy late b-day! Damn, that's a long time to be working on a game

Absolute cinema

Hi hi, I loved this game! It's so very good! I liked it more than cave story, to be honest. Dunno why exactly, maybe I am weird.

<SPOILERS INCOMING>

I wanna do a pacifist run now, see the new stuff. (There's a few things I am hoping for) Also save my coin from mood machines.

A few serious notes:

In the cave with the drunk girl, you can get softlocked if coming out with no big bullet ammo. Kinda on you tho

The sprite for the gun burst and the sprites for the bullets have slightly different speeds, so if you quickly look in another direction, the burst will go that way while the bullets go the opposite

Lucia's shell is wrongly described, it says shotgun despite being a machine gun

I don't think the panic ring actually works. Unless it's less than double strength, due to the way I tested it.

wow, actual bug: After jumping in the blood lake with fishing gurl

___________________________________________

############################################################################################

ERROR in

action number 1

of Draw Event

for object objBullet:

Trying to draw non-existing sprite.

at gml_Object_objBullet_Draw_0

############################################################################################

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

stack frame is

gml_Object_objBullet_Draw_0 (line -1)

Also, I found the secret :D  *eye winks* *eye winks* Maybe I shouldn't tell anyone about this...

You can die after getting all the targets (the poison lake) and when overworked girl/Amelia respawns you, ya die

This is totes my actual record and not at all a bug:

The graphical map loads after the map itself, I think, so I can open the save dialogue before there's anything on the screen. or walk, or shoot. etc

The menu should change load to be the first option, sucks having a mini heart attack cuz you pressed begin and are scared of it overwriting your save

LMAO the last boss fight, with the cult leader girl, after fighting you can just go left back through the door you entered and she will stop you again. You can keep doing the boss fight forever.

A few random notes:

The mood machine is right, I am in love with the pit of despair! I didn't break a single spinny thing on my way out, I hope this is acknowledged later on PS: it was not :(

I like the librarian lady :D My bookworm tendencies got me a key

I wish the gallery was finished

Using one rocket jump, then three gun jumps (using gun at the same time as a jump sometimes goes real tall), you can get almost as much height as just using machine gun

Is it wrong to pick up girls in a pocket dimension?

I don't get the silly tetrapod joke. It failed?

I have 20 items in my inventory, I wonder if I missed one?

"The mushrooms can get you very high" is a superb joke

And now, screenshots I took:

invisible block

Invisible non-block
Some other stuff is also in front of protag. I can remember a door, but I didn't take a screenshot.

Weird lights


Huh? It didn't visually register


The attention to detail is insane. The two stars, I mean.


This.


Thank you very much for the game! I really do think this could be a paid game on steam...

Me: I am going to fish :D

Also me: What in the actual fu

It feels unreal for people to be this open, so very quickly, but it's nice.
I'd love if the names had different colors!

Very interested in the guy whose fish form was so impactful you can't remember their look! Wish you luck in the development!

That is so cool!

I refuse the allegations that this made me feel something

[SPOILERS]

Just like, replay all the routes. Ya can skip

If there is a hole, there is a goal

Hmm, I am interested in the worldbuilding here.

[SPOILER WARNING I GUESS, I really don't think this is necessary]

So basically, froot box has a monopoly on fruit trees, and they are somehow a secret from all society. Only a few select people in the company know about fruit trees, which would explain why no one notices the fruit tree growing right to the side, they just dismiss it as a normal tree! Quite cool!

The tree grows and eventually gives fruit, either people recognize the fruit but are too scared to try or they don't recognize it (implying froot box sells them in a different, processed look)

Then, with the Revolution of the Cherry, the company realizes it and destroys that tree, but the damage is already done. Two things could happen: People plant in their backyards and share seeds secretly for years to come! (or) People boycott the company and it goes in shambles, destroying the monopoly and allowing more people to sell and share fruits!

One thing I find very cool is the fact Pippa's trees grow in but a mere year! She really did study hard, a genius! She decreased the time in 5-10 times depending on the species of cherry tree!

PS: I think this is the origin of Kitty, the dog :D (Konayachi's icon)

Salut Bimi!

>But if it's more convenient for you, you can speak in English.

Mais je veux parler en français! And: If it's more convenient to you, you can speak in French. (Je peux líre bien, mais écrit...)

>If I understand correctly, did you have trouble understanding the game?

Yeah, moi français est horrible actuellement. But I only found the game because I was looking for french games, so I really did want to play it as immersive material to learn french. (j'ai exagéré un peu, I was able to understand like 50% of it, so I am very proud)

>Have you played with the English version?

I am sorry, but I haven't played with the english version much, so I don't think I could tell you about it's quality, sorry again. I really liked that you could change the language in the quest room though!

Thank you very much for the game! It was very fun, I really liked the mechanic of decision! I wish you luck in the development!

Ohoho, je ne pas parler français 👍👍👍

Ce jeu est très amusant et je t'aime il

Je ne pas comprendré une merdé, mais est magnifique👍

Je vraiment... hope I didn't kill someone accidentally lol

The sections with the foreign languages were the most understandable part 💀

Merci beaucoup pour le jeu!

One day I'll play this again and I will understand all of it, I swear

Ohh, purple. I like purple. I... *agressively* love purple.

Excited for the build!

As someone who recently played a friendship VN and actually felt jealous of the protag, this hurt in more ways than one

It healed them all afterwards tho, protag got a nat 20 with advantage on charisma with that flirting sequence

Will be rooting and tooting like a tree!

No, yeah, the side quest is working fine, but when I went to actually fish with my fishing rod and bait no matter what I clicked it just didn't register in the minigame. I should have become the best fisher, what with all the training from the first game.

I am so sad

The end of the demo came so out of nowhere, I thought it would be 12 days. Didn't even enter the first dungeon

I really, really loved the writing in this. I was mad cackling, which isn't very normal.

This ia sjoorible gamm IIIIIIII CAN"T FISH CRYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYING EMOJI(SSS) :(

IF I CAN"T FISH< THEN WHAT IS THE PURPOSE OF LIFE???

Ciara's shirt should say "You die if you can't fish"

Its like teh saying "IF U Gib man fish, he die tomorrow. Teach a man fish, for a lifetime"

Ah, I knew I'd really like something from ojosama

I love the story, the combat system, the everything

I didn't find any hidden charms in the first dungeon cuz I didn't even know they existed lol

BUGS:

The passive abilities were working even though I had unequipped them. This worked for encore, lucid dreaming, remember my love and red zone. Did not work with encore. Didn't test the others

I noticed that when the "Finalize" attack and defense boosts go away, they take away more than they give. I was almost killing the boss, then the attack boost went away and I started giving negative damage 💀 💀 💀 My man was at 60/25 health. Later I checked with a minion and it also happened with the defense boost.

Also, couldn't get these charms >:(

You missed the fact you can, at the first house, walk into the big clock

Kudos to you for finishing it in spite of all that! I gib up

It's still a pretty cool game overall