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Did you know nomination
edit- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Bruxton (talk) 01:35, 17 March 2023 (UTC)
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Bella Ramsey
Troy Baker
Scott Shepherd
- ... that Bella Ramsey (pictured) struggled to hold a real rifle while filming the eighth episode of The Last of Us? Source: HBO (11:55)
- ALT1: ... that Troy Baker (pictured), who played Joel in The Last of Us, guest starred in the eighth episode of the television adaptation? Source: Entertainment Weekly
- ALT2: ... that the temperature was around −17 °C (1 °F) during filming of the eighth episode of The Last of Us? Source: British GQ
- ALT3: ... that David's (actor Scott Shepherd pictured) goal in the eighth episode of The Last of Us is reflective of organized religion and white supremacists? Source: HBO (29:39)
- ALT3a: ... that in the eighth episode of The Last of Us, David's (actor Scott Shepherd pictured) goal of producing offspring is reflective of organized religion and white supremacists?
- Reviewed: The Kinks' 1965 US tour
- Comment: Image of Ramsey with ALT0, Baker with ALT1, Shepherd with ALT3.
Converted from a redirect by Rhain (talk). Self-nominated at 01:00, 7 March 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/When We Are in Need; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
Article and hook meet requirements and the QPQ is completed. I personally think ALT1 is probably the most "interesting" for the DYK section, although ALT0 is just a smidge behind for me in that regard. ALT2 and 3 work as well, but 0 and 1 are great choices. Soulbust (talk) 02:22, 9 March 2023 (UTC)
- I see a source for ALT0 the gun was heavy, the other source seems to be a video. Bruxton (talk) 01:34, 17 March 2023 (UTC)
Why so squeamish?
editIt's a little irritating that we have to use a PC euphemism like 'sexual assault' to describe what David tries to do to Ellie. Be honest. He tries to rape her. Adding extra syllables, making it sound more abstract, just under-communicates how horrid the scene was (in a bad way). 2600:8800:7000:4DE0:9557:76EB:4763:E267 (talk) 20:24, 10 March 2023 (UTC)
GA Review
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Nominator: Rhain (talk · contribs)
Reviewer: Skyshifter (talk · contribs) 13:24, 18 March 2024 (UTC)
Looking forward to that season 1 good topic! Skyshiftertalk 13:24, 18 March 2024 (UTC)
General comments
edit- The infobox image has a valid fair use rationale. The other images have valid free use licenses for Commons.
- No copyvio
Prose
edit- Infobox, lead, plot, and conception and writing are fine.
Casting and characters
edit- a turning point for Ellie, and felt she will have -> feel like it should be "would"
- he expected a small role feels a bit redundant with the previous except perhaps as a small cameo. Could remove the former sentence or merge these two sentences together.
- Prior to the announcement of Scott Shepherd's casting, rumors suggested Baker would play David, but he felt it "would've been too on the nose". Shepherd's casting was revealed in the first trailer in December. While the way it is written can suggest Shepherd was casted to interpret David, this is never directly mentioned, and it slighly confused me when reading for the first time (probably for being a non-native speaker though). Either way, I'd suggest changing it to something like Prior to the announcement of Scott Shepherd's casting as David, rumors suggested Baker would play the character [...]
- the first trailer in December. I'd suggest adding the year here, as the previous mention of the year was two paragraphs ago.
Filming
edit- Production took place in Okotoks mention the town is in Canada, or at least Alberta
- I just noticed the lead said the episode was recorded in Calgary, Alberta; I've changed it.
- including adding trees -> including the addition of trees
- I think semicolons are used too much in this section. I'd recommend rephrasing some sentences (some semicolons can also just be replaced by a dot).
Reception
edit- Broadcast and ratings is fine
- The website's critical consensus noted I think "noted" is commonly used for facts, but the quote is subjective. I'd recommend going with the usual "reads".
- and maintaining focus -> and the maintenance of focus; "the" is needed in this sentence
- Pedro Pascal's performance as Joel was well received. Would recommend expanding or attributing the sentence
Sources + spot-check
edit- All sources seem to be correctly formatted and reliable, and the usage of primary sources is valid here.
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I don't think this confirms the episode was rushed. The review says that there are "pieces missing" and similar, but doesn't say the episode is "rushed", "fast-paced" or anything similar — in fact, the reviewer says "it's got a good pace". "Streamlining", apparently (again, not a native speaker), doesn't necessarily mean "fast" etc. I believe this should be removed from "Several critics considered the episode rushed", unless I missed something.
@Rhain: I saw everything was applied correctly so far; will pass after the above comment is responded to. Skyshiftertalk 00:25, 23 March 2024 (UTC)
- @Skyshifter: Thanks for the review! Good catch—I've removed the ref from that particular sentence. Please let me know if there's anything else. – Rhain ☔ (he/him) 00:29, 23 March 2024 (UTC)
- ✓ Pass Congratulations! Skyshiftertalk 00:32, 23 March 2024 (UTC)
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