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Latest comment: 1 year ago by Czar in topic Photos

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There are a few more photos of the wedding, procession, and the aftermath in The Illustrated London News, 128 (3503), 1906-06-09. I imported the ones most relevant to the article. czar 21:10, 6 February 2021 (UTC)Reply

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 01:21, 18 July 2021 (UTC)Reply

  • Add a short description and then WP:ALT text for every image.
  • "afterwards" → "afterward" (American English)
That link sends you to "afterward". See [1] Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 00:53, 19 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • "bouquet of flowers" → "flower bouquet" (simply "bouquet" would also work because "bouquet" means an "arranged bunch of flowers" so "bouquet of flowers" is repetitive).
  • Add a serial comma after "antigovernmental curriculum".
    • "its antimilitary, antireligious, antigovernmental curriculum and other subversive activities" antimilitary, antireligious, antigovernmental describes the curriculum here so it's not a list of items
  • "antianarchist journalist" → "anti-anarchist journalist"
  • "regarded himself an outspoken enemy" → "regarded himself as an outspoken enemy"
  • "told the investigation" - reword
  • "a bombs expert" → "a bomb expert"
  • Remove the comma after "June 1907".
  • "kangaroo court,[20][21][22][23][24] – make a WP:CITEBUNDLE.
  • "judgement" → "judgment" (American English)
...but judgment is more common for American English. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 00:54, 19 July 2021 (UTC)Reply

Photos

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I think I have some photographs of this bombing in stereoscope. 90.255.192.140 (talk) 20:18, 6 December 2022 (UTC)Reply

If so, they be in the public domain (per commons:Template:PD-Spain-photo) so feel free to upload them! czar 00:29, 7 December 2022 (UTC)Reply