Wikipedia:Peer review/Gray Wolf/archive1

I've been organizing and working on this article a bit, hoping to submit it to FAC soon. I think the section on howling would do nicely with an image, and the references could be expanded. Any suggestions? Sango123 23:33, August 19, 2005 (UTC)

• Would love to see this as FA. I'd like to see more on wolves in myth / fable - there's a link to werewolves but maybe a bit of text on that in the main article would help. If the images are ok (re: copyright tags) then its ready for submission now imho, save the addition of the werewolf stuff. --PopUpPirate 23:48, August 19, 2005 (UTC)
• Comment - Great myth / fable additions! I'd support as FAC if you put it there! --PopUpPirate 21:21, August 23, 2005 (UTC)
  • How's this? Sango123 14:08, August 22, 2005 (UTC)

• Why is there a section on life span and another section of mortality? The TOC is very long, you may want to look at taking out some of the ===h3=== headings--nixie 02:19, 20 August 2005 (UTC)[reply]
  • Thanks - I've moved all age-related information under mortality and somewhat shortened the TOC. Sango123 14:19, August 20, 2005 (UTC)
• For me, it's a very good read. Excellent work. — Stevey7788 (talk) 01:04, 22 August 2005 (UTC)[reply]
• made a few copyedits to the article. It reads good. --ZeWrestler ^Talk 16:49, 22 August 2005 (UTC)[reply]
  • Thank you. Just one thing: could 'grayish' be changed back to 'greyish' for consistency? Sango123 17:07, August 22, 2005 (UTC)
    • Good point. change it then. --ZeWrestler ^Talk 17:46, 22 August 2005 (UTC)[reply]
      • Done. Sango123 17:53, August 22, 2005 (UTC)